考研英語(yǔ)作文15篇(優(yōu)選)
在生活、工作和學(xué)習(xí)中,許多人都有過(guò)寫(xiě)作文的經(jīng)歷,對(duì)作文都不陌生吧,作文是通過(guò)文字來(lái)表達(dá)一個(gè)主題意義的記敘方法。相信寫(xiě)作文是一個(gè)讓許多人都頭痛的問(wèn)題,下面是小編幫大家整理的考研英語(yǔ)作文,僅供參考,歡迎大家閱讀。
考研英語(yǔ)作文1
Dear Professor Alexander,
On behalf of all the students at my university who share a love for the English language, I cordially invite you to give a lecture to at Beijing Foreign Studies University.
As you are one of the leading experts in the English language in the world, I believe that the students will not only be able to learn from you, but to be inspired by you as well. We are hoping that you will be available for a lecture on our campus on January 4 at 10:00 am. There has been 45 minutes allocated for your lecture and 15 minutes for a question and answer session.
If you are interested in coming to our university for the lecture, you can email me at the address below. We are looking forward to meeting you.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
(二)參考譯文
尊敬的先生或女士:
謹(jǐn)代表本校全體熱愛(ài)英語(yǔ)語(yǔ)言的學(xué)生的名義,我想誠(chéng)摯地邀請(qǐng)您給北京外國(guó)語(yǔ)大學(xué)學(xué)生做一場(chǎng)演講。
由于您是中國(guó)英語(yǔ)語(yǔ)言研究方面杰出的專(zhuān)家之一,我相信學(xué)生們不僅能從您身上學(xué)到很多知識(shí),而且也能夠獲得很大的啟發(fā)。我們期待您能抽出時(shí)間在1月4日上午10點(diǎn)來(lái)學(xué)校做一個(gè)演講,其中45分鐘是您的'演講時(shí)間,另外15分鐘則是問(wèn)答環(huán)節(jié)。隨后會(huì)有一個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單的招待晚宴。
如果您對(duì)來(lái)我校演講感興趣,可以通過(guò)以下的地址和我進(jìn)行郵件聯(lián)系。盼復(fù)。
您真誠(chéng)的,
李明
亮點(diǎn)詞匯
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(三)道長(zhǎng)點(diǎn)評(píng)
邀請(qǐng)信包括邀請(qǐng)參加宴會(huì)、午餐、晚餐、聚會(huì)、舞會(huì)、婚禮等等。邀請(qǐng)信分兩種:正規(guī)格式即請(qǐng)柬,非正規(guī)格式即一般邀請(qǐng)信。邀請(qǐng)信務(wù)必具體明確完整,不可留任何疑問(wèn)使對(duì)方捉摸不定,寫(xiě)明場(chǎng)合、地點(diǎn)、年月日及具體時(shí)間。
(四)佳句拓展:
1、I am pleased to invite you to participate in an activity to be held from January 4 to 7 in Beijing.
我很高興邀請(qǐng)您參加從1月4日到7日在北京舉行的一場(chǎng)活動(dòng)。
2、It is my pleasure to extend an invitation to you to take part in an evening party for purpose of celebrating my birthday.為了慶祝我的生日,我很高興邀請(qǐng)你來(lái)參加一場(chǎng)晚會(huì)。
3、I hope that you have not any plan for the coming Sunday, as I would like you to spend it with us at our home.我希望你下星期天沒(méi)有什么安排,因?yàn)槲蚁胙?qǐng)你到我家玩。
考研英語(yǔ)作文2
As the title indicates, “…… ”, the set of pictures apparently reminds us that… . It is discernable that…… .
The drawing virtually reminds its audience a widespread phenomenon existing negatively in the area of basic education in China, that is,…… . That is to say,…… . Such a practice is very harmful in terms of the following aspects.Firstly,…… . Secondly,…… . Last but not the least,…… .
In my point of view,…… , but it is only part of the picture. On the other hand,… . Therefore, it is an urgent task to…… . As children are the future of our nation, creating a good environment for their upbringing means creating a bright and promising future for our nation.
考研英語(yǔ)作文3
At the first sight of this picture, we may be astonished by the reality that the little girl is dreaming of being an Internet celebrity since it is a fabulously profitable occupation. Apparently, the teacher also deems the career planning incredible with her hand covering her month and her eyes wide open. And the caption indicates “the dream of becoming an Internet celebrity ”.
From the thought-provoking drawing, it can be inferred that the younger generation has been somewhat misled by social media. As the Internet celebrity economy sweeps through every corner of the world, the whole society has been impressed and entertained. For some moment, even adults are keen on getting involved as to make a living in this way, which is seemingly a short cut to fortune and fame, something perceived as a symbol of accomplishment. Hence kids are undoubtedly unable to tell whether being a celebrity on the Internet can be a decent job or not.
Nevertheless, adults are obliged to make it clear to children that what endures in life is not the superficial objects boasted by these Internet stars but rather our conscience and intelligence. Moreover, schools are also expected to give priority to the education on values instead of exclusive focus on knowledge. And the combined efforts will definitely usher in a more harmonious society.
考研英語(yǔ)作文4
Dear Bob,
I have arrived in Shanghai yesterday and I want to show my gratitude to you for your hospitality.
I am so sorry that I have forgotten to return the music CD that you lent me last month and I decide to send it back as soon as possible. Together with it is another CD of traditional Chinese music as a gift for you, which I hope that you will enjoy it very much.
I wish I had not caused too much trouble for you. Thank you again for the help you gave me during my stay in Canada. Please tell me if you visit China some day and I can be your tour guide.
Best regards.
Sincerely yours,
Li Ming
考研英語(yǔ)作文5
What is conspicuously presented in the given data is exactly the proportion of spending of inhabitants in a certain city in our country during the Spring Festival. According to the statistics available in the chart above, the total spending can be classified into four kinds as follows: the cost of new year’s gifts, traffic spending, party and gathering costs and others. In general, the figures provided above suggest that new year’s presents, making up 40%, is the largest percentage, then next is traffic, party and gathering, and others at 20% respectively.
It goes far beyond any reasonable dispute that the above chart is a vivid reflection of a fairly familiar social phenomenon: people in mounting numbers spend too much on giving gifts to each other for the time being. Indeed, the previous few decades has witnessed the growing incidence of such a trend. And it’s so prevalent that a great deal of attention is being paid today to such a tide. The general public and the mass media have focused on the strengths and weaknesses of it, but few have come up with relevant actions.
Much can be done. The mass media and schools of all levels, fore and most, could serve as a counterbalance, doing its utmost to awaken the general public to the severity of this upsetting phenomenon. Meanwhile, it is the responsibility of the government to curb such a behavior. I am strongly convinced that the sooner we take such practices seriously, the better our prospect will be.
考研英語(yǔ)作文6
考研即考驗(yàn),年年如是,周而復(fù)始。時(shí)臨沖刺,很多考生在問(wèn)一個(gè)問(wèn)題:“最后一段時(shí)間,怎樣才能提高我的寫(xiě)作水平?” 和同事閑聊,發(fā)現(xiàn)一個(gè)部分真理:Writing cannot be taught. 寫(xiě)作水平的提升必是一個(gè)漫長(zhǎng)的過(guò)程,一定不是靠老師教出來(lái),而是靠自己悟出來(lái)?佳凶魑囊徊豢糹ndependent writing,二不用critical thinking,嚴(yán)格意義上不應(yīng)該算作純粹的寫(xiě)作考試。解構(gòu)一下,其實(shí)是個(gè)中文構(gòu)思+英語(yǔ)翻譯的“混血”?紙(chǎng)之上不存在絕對(duì)意義上的優(yōu)秀作文,存在的只是符合標(biāo)準(zhǔn)的作文。這其實(shí)也就意味著,我們必須對(duì)照標(biāo)準(zhǔn),寫(xiě)出考研所要求的“功利”作文,在考感中體會(huì)語(yǔ)感,通過(guò)掌握考試規(guī)律來(lái)提高我們的應(yīng)考能力與作文“成績(jī)”。
一、評(píng)分
知己知彼,百戰(zhàn)不殆。通過(guò)對(duì)于往屆考生在考場(chǎng)上構(gòu)建的歷年真題作文,對(duì)比著分?jǐn)?shù)仔細(xì)研究從而熟悉老師的評(píng)分習(xí)慣,對(duì)于08屆的考生正常甚至是超常發(fā)揮自身水平極有幫助。老師寫(xiě)的范文再好也不如學(xué)生寫(xiě)的來(lái)得有參考意義。
就同學(xué)們最為關(guān)心的大作文而言,“評(píng)分重點(diǎn)在于內(nèi)容的完整性、文章的組織連貫性、語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯的多樣性及語(yǔ)言的準(zhǔn)確性”。不難看出,最讓大家頭痛的語(yǔ)言方面,大作文從未要求考生寫(xiě)出華美的句子,只對(duì)語(yǔ)言的準(zhǔn)確與變化做出了規(guī)定。如何保證在全文表達(dá)、語(yǔ)法、拼寫(xiě)準(zhǔn)確的情況下追求詞匯的variety,以及句子開(kāi)頭、結(jié)構(gòu)與長(zhǎng)短的變化,變成最后一段時(shí)間考生需重點(diǎn)關(guān)注的內(nèi)容。
小作文的評(píng)分側(cè)重點(diǎn)在于“信息點(diǎn)的覆蓋和內(nèi)容的組織、語(yǔ)言的準(zhǔn)確性、格式和語(yǔ)域的恰當(dāng)”。特別需要提醒考生注意的一點(diǎn)是小作文“允許在作文中使用提示語(yǔ)中出現(xiàn)的關(guān)鍵詞,但使用提示語(yǔ)中出現(xiàn)過(guò)的詞組或句子將被扣分”。有心的同學(xué)對(duì)照著看看自己寫(xiě)的06年小作文,是否有照抄提示語(yǔ)中出現(xiàn)的表達(dá)?(07年小作文提示語(yǔ)太短,想抄也沒(méi)得抄~)
于是,基礎(chǔ)較好,以第五檔(17-20分)為目標(biāo)的同學(xué),在不犯錯(cuò)誤的情況下盡可能追求卓越——行走江湖,勝向險(xiǎn)中求;基礎(chǔ)較弱,以及格分為目標(biāo)的同學(xué),以不犯錯(cuò)誤為目的,盡可能追求簡(jiǎn)單,謹(jǐn)記安全第一。
二、審題
人也忙,淚也忙,暗暗訴泣悲語(yǔ)長(zhǎng)。文字寫(xiě)的再好,審題掛掉了,眼淚都沒(méi)有了?佳杏⒄Z(yǔ)寫(xiě)作屬于可控制性話題(controlled writing),審題須在出題者預(yù)設(shè)控制范圍之中?忌淖魑膽(yīng)該是對(duì)于題目的合理回應(yīng)(response to the task requirement)。有去年的學(xué)員問(wèn),老師,07年閱卷是否存在壓分的現(xiàn)象?我覺(jué)得自己作文寫(xiě)的挺好的!仔細(xì)問(wèn)了問(wèn)他考場(chǎng)之上的審題,大作文寫(xiě)的方向是一個(gè)人應(yīng)該從辨證的角度,不同的視角面對(duì)人生,小作文給學(xué)校圖書(shū)館提出的三點(diǎn)建議是:多購(gòu)進(jìn)新書(shū);增加存包位的數(shù)量;多購(gòu)置電腦。如果考生讀到此處發(fā)現(xiàn)這些審題似曾相識(shí),恭喜,重在參與了。07年小作文無(wú)任何細(xì)化信息點(diǎn)的提示,但隱性關(guān)鍵詞出現(xiàn)在情景中——SERVICE,也就意味著寫(xiě)作的'重點(diǎn)應(yīng)放在如何促進(jìn)服務(wù)上而不是關(guān)注硬件上。你可以寫(xiě)圖書(shū)館的電腦應(yīng)能接入到互聯(lián)網(wǎng),工作人員效率和服務(wù)態(tài)度應(yīng)該提高,新書(shū)流通渠道應(yīng)該放寬……Similarly,06年中要求提供“financial aid”,其他的援助渠道(如捐物捐書(shū),下鄉(xiāng)支邊,免費(fèi)家教)并不符合情景要求;05年小作文辭職是因?yàn)椤皀ow you find that the work is not what you expected”,設(shè)題陷阱可見(jiàn)一斑。因此,父母需要照顧不是辭職原因,自己希望深造不是原因,工資待遇太低同樣不是原因,但專(zhuān)業(yè)所學(xué)無(wú)法發(fā)揮,難以融入企業(yè)文化,工作壓力太大,薪酬不像原先許諾的那般全都是符合要求的原因。
三、印象
考研作文閱卷,工作量大,任務(wù)繁重,更為關(guān)鍵的是,是以閱卷份數(shù)作為報(bào)酬體制。于是,閱卷過(guò)程往往簡(jiǎn)化成為字?jǐn)?shù)——段落——審題——首段——語(yǔ)言——結(jié)構(gòu)的過(guò)程也就不難理解。得開(kāi)頭者得天下。對(duì)于像作文這樣的主觀題而言,考生與閱卷老師從來(lái)就猶如博弈。大作文一定要保證足夠的字?jǐn)?shù)。最新文章長(zhǎng)度扣分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)規(guī)定:少10個(gè)字以?xún)?nèi)扣1分;少10~20個(gè)字扣2.5分;少20~30字扣4分;少30~40字扣6分;字?jǐn)?shù)不超過(guò)100扣12分。由于閱卷過(guò)程中老師不可能具體去數(shù)文章有多少字,為了保證不因?yàn)殚喚砣藛T主觀上的視覺(jué)差異導(dǎo)致扣分,最穩(wěn)妥的辦法就是稍多于標(biāo)準(zhǔn)字?jǐn)?shù)。大頭或小頭娃娃般的段落結(jié)構(gòu)一定摒棄,中間段闡釋漫畫(huà)含義的過(guò)程一定要力求深入涉及到問(wèn)題本質(zhì),同時(shí)保證足夠多的字?jǐn)?shù)。
另外,最好現(xiàn)在就想好考場(chǎng)之上大小兩篇作文運(yùn)用何種格式,若是齊頭,注意段與段之間空行;若是縮進(jìn),注意段首空4~5個(gè)英語(yǔ)字母。你的字可以寫(xiě)的很難看,但是一定要清晰易辨,保證卷面整潔,字體大小適宜。
四、結(jié)構(gòu)
建議考生臨考前回歸到圖畫(huà)作文的準(zhǔn)備之上。結(jié)合最近幾年出題的特點(diǎn),雙圖似乎漸成趨勢(shì)。不管是雙圖互補(bǔ)(兩幅圖畫(huà)態(tài)度相同,并列關(guān)系,如06、07)還是雙圖對(duì)比(兩幅圖畫(huà)態(tài)度相反,轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系,如03、00),描述過(guò)程中一定要分清主次,體現(xiàn)圖畫(huà)中的邏輯關(guān)系。考場(chǎng)上結(jié)合具體的direction關(guān)鍵詞選擇文章功能段落的構(gòu)建:
07——describe / explain / example
06——describe / interpret / view
05——describe / interpret / comment
04——describe / interpret / example
圖畫(huà)描述、意義闡釋、建議評(píng)論、舉例論證,一共四種功能段落,每一種假若都能操作熟練,考場(chǎng)上寫(xiě)作只不過(guò)是一個(gè)排列組合的過(guò)程。正是鑒于此,全文模板的弊病顯露無(wú)疑。太多學(xué)員在07年的考場(chǎng)上拿全文模板進(jìn)行寫(xiě)作拿到了極低的分?jǐn)?shù),本質(zhì)原因在于不知道變通。作文第三段要求寫(xiě)作的“例子”的具體內(nèi)容可是無(wú)任何模板可言的!
就微觀結(jié)構(gòu)而言,考生需在沖刺階段強(qiáng)化練習(xí)論證方法和文章銜接手段(cohesive devices)。一般說(shuō)來(lái),因?yàn)橛⒄Z(yǔ)寫(xiě)作往往重心前置,于是開(kāi)頭寫(xiě)作中心主線(thesis statement)的時(shí)候要明確清晰。在進(jìn)行論證的時(shí)候要運(yùn)用恰當(dāng)?shù)恼Z(yǔ)篇模式(如exemplification舉例說(shuō)明,cause and effect因果論證, comparison and contrast比較對(duì)比等)。銜接手段主要有語(yǔ)法手段(對(duì)應(yīng)、省略、替代、連接)和詞匯手段(重復(fù)、同反義、上下義、具體抽象、語(yǔ)義場(chǎng))。段落內(nèi)部句間的銜接主要依靠“還原邏輯詞”的理念。中文是一個(gè)尚世功的疏懶型語(yǔ)言,與法治的英語(yǔ)有著太大的不同,翻譯過(guò)程中需加以轉(zhuǎn)化,如:
無(wú)主句:四十不惑。(一個(gè)人到了他四十歲的時(shí)候他就會(huì)沒(méi)有任何疑惑。)
省邏輯:雨下的很大,我不能來(lái)了。(我不能到你這來(lái)了因?yàn)楝F(xiàn)在雨下的很大。)
五、表達(dá)
語(yǔ)言作為評(píng)分原則中的基本要素之一,要求考研同學(xué)注意多樣性和準(zhǔn)確性。如不知如何把肚子里的中文表達(dá)成英文,除了最后沖刺階段重點(diǎn)專(zhuān)項(xiàng)訓(xùn)練中譯英單句外,考前一定要體會(huì)清楚同義改寫(xiě)的策略:
07年自信self-confidence → 相信自己believing in oneself
06年偶像崇拜idol worship → 盲目喜愛(ài)明星loving the superstars in a blind way
05年孝順filial piety → 養(yǎng)老provide for the aged → 資助finance and support
04年終點(diǎn)線the finishing line → 目的地destination
最后,寬同學(xué)們一個(gè)心,語(yǔ)言學(xué)中研究指出,當(dāng)語(yǔ)言學(xué)習(xí)者掌握了1500個(gè)積極詞匯時(shí)就能夠描述所有事情,于是,你現(xiàn)在的詞匯水平完全夠用。重點(diǎn)的不是在于背了多少單詞,而是在于是否能夠有本事用簡(jiǎn)單詞表達(dá)出復(fù)雜意。有興趣的同學(xué)可從網(wǎng)上down些VOA慢速英語(yǔ)的文本仔細(xì)揣摩體會(huì)。
六、檢查
好的作文不是寫(xiě)出來(lái)的,一定是靠改出來(lái)的。文壇大家無(wú)一不數(shù)易其稿,仔細(xì)推敲方能成就一代名篇。所以,考前寫(xiě)作數(shù)目不需太多,但每寫(xiě)一篇,it counts. 可以考慮參加一些網(wǎng)上的互助批改小組,他人畢竟身在山外,能提出一些很好的建議。若無(wú)條件,可通過(guò)對(duì)作文參考書(shū)中的中文作文做互譯的練習(xí),把自己寫(xiě)的和英語(yǔ)范文之間做比較,自己體會(huì)不同。另外,考場(chǎng)之上修改作文無(wú)需對(duì)結(jié)構(gòu)和內(nèi)容做大范圍的刪改,只需關(guān)注審題、拼寫(xiě)、搭配、語(yǔ)法、字?jǐn)?shù)等。
七、模板
沖刺階段總結(jié)屬于自己的獨(dú)有模板,對(duì)于各種基礎(chǔ)的學(xué)員都有意義。因?yàn)檎l(shuí)也無(wú)法判定考場(chǎng)之上是否擁有足夠的可能順利構(gòu)建一篇嶄新的文章。個(gè)人建議按上文提出的四種功能段落專(zhuān)項(xiàng)準(zhǔn)備模板,然后拿各種文章熟練套寫(xiě),強(qiáng)化改寫(xiě)和填空的能力。這就要求學(xué)生具備將句子往模板的方向想的能力(基礎(chǔ)是中文改寫(xiě)的能力)。同樣的模板分?jǐn)?shù)差異很大,說(shuō)明中間填充的內(nèi)容往往起著更加重要的作用。
八、順序
考研試題可允許隨便跨區(qū)。很多老師都有不同的建議,對(duì)此,筆者不予置評(píng)。只是提醒有想法在考場(chǎng)之上先寫(xiě)作文的考生一定要在考前至少運(yùn)用4~8套題練練手,培養(yǎng)做題的pace。因?yàn)椴怀鲆馔,大部分中?guó)同學(xué)早已經(jīng)習(xí)慣了先有語(yǔ)言輸入才能有語(yǔ)言輸出。
九、心理
考生到此階段,內(nèi)心充盈的感覺(jué)有兩種:焦慮感和內(nèi)疚感。于是,心理的自我暗示與調(diào)節(jié)便顯得尤為關(guān)鍵。蜜蜂整日忙碌,贏得表彰;蚊子不停奔波,無(wú)人贊揚(yáng)。多么努力不重要,為什么努力才重要,朝著正確的方向努力更加重要。此刻,培養(yǎng)一下阿Qsim,在床頭放珠水仙未嘗不是一個(gè)方法。徜徉周末的下午,慵懶的冬日陽(yáng)光斜灑,偶爾到草坪上消磨一個(gè)一個(gè)時(shí)間,去湖邊發(fā)幾寸悠長(zhǎng)的呆吧。
十、提示
每天起床時(shí)賴(lài)5分鐘床,憧憬一下考上后的美好生活,然后回到現(xiàn)實(shí),思忖一下今天復(fù)習(xí)的重點(diǎn)是什么;每天盡量早睡早起,熬夜不再必要,保證一天精神最旺盛的時(shí)候是考試的時(shí)間段;該玩則玩,每天挑若干個(gè)固定時(shí)間放松自己并將表?yè)芸?分鐘;隨身攜帶空白卡片,隨時(shí)記錄自己突然想起但又不太確定的復(fù)習(xí)點(diǎn);晚上挑半小時(shí)和研友討論當(dāng)天復(fù)習(xí)心得及彼此對(duì)于試題的預(yù)測(cè);建立考試生物鐘,提高答題速度;考前一天去考場(chǎng)踩下點(diǎn),熟悉一下考場(chǎng)周?chē)h(huán)境,明確路線,準(zhǔn)備考場(chǎng)工具包(相關(guān)證件+字號(hào)較粗的筆+功能飲料+巧克力+保暖+厚鞋)。
考研英語(yǔ)作文7
本文是關(guān)于考研英語(yǔ)作文的一個(gè)模版,是比較完整和適用的.黃金組合,希望能給大家以啟示和幫助。(問(wèn)題)單向 格式總共是三段
段一:s1+s2+s3+s4+s5 (s——sentence)共5句話,一共60字左右,下面給出每句話可以套用的格式,這些漂亮的格式是一定要牢記和熟背的!
s1是介紹,固定格式有
the past few years(decades)have witnessed us (our society) faced with the issue of……in recent years there has been a growing concern among the general public over the issue of……nothing can be more serious (upsetting ,outstanding, meaningful…) than the issue of……
s2+s3運(yùn)用flex 技巧進(jìn)行擴(kuò)展和包裝,這些flex 技巧在后面詳細(xì)給出,要熟背!
運(yùn)用statistics:
according to a recent survey made by dr. cao, head of sociology department at beijing university,70%....;and 30%....(在此直接用數(shù)字,不要寫(xiě)英文,一般寫(xiě)兩句隨便給出兩個(gè)數(shù)據(jù)足夠)
s4 “同一份調(diào)查還表明…(又給出另一個(gè)數(shù)據(jù))
the same survey also shows that +(又一數(shù)據(jù))
s5 收尾,與s1呼應(yīng),“由此可見(jiàn),…問(wèn)題已經(jīng)非常嚴(yán)重了”
it can be concluded, therefore, that the issue of……h(huán)as become more and more serious (harmful).
段二:120——140字左右
開(kāi)頭:s1 : 10 words
to account for the above-mentioned phenomenon (issue,tendency), various reasons (causes) have been put forward.the above problem (phenomenon) may well give rise to some effects (consequences) as follow.
s2+s3+s4: 50 words
開(kāi)始列舉了,但是千萬(wàn)不要用那些濫詞:first,second,firstly,secondly,印象分會(huì)降低,要用些漂亮的詞,盡可能用短語(yǔ):
in the very beginning,
+s2
in the first place,
in the second place, in the end,
+s3 +s4
what is more, last but
s2,s3,s4 在簡(jiǎn)單闡述了各自一個(gè)觀點(diǎn)之后,就開(kāi)始進(jìn)行flex擴(kuò)展,擴(kuò)展可運(yùn)用quotation 或是example達(dá)到增加60——80字:
quotation:
to illustrate the point, let’s take a look at what ……(president cliton) said in an article :“。。。!
所以,整個(gè)第二段是核心段,基本結(jié)構(gòu)是:
開(kāi)頭s1(10字) + s2 擴(kuò)展
s3 50字 擴(kuò)展 共擴(kuò)展60-80字
s4 擴(kuò)展
段三(解決方法,suggestions) 100 words
s1 15 words
we should take immediate measures, for if the present situation continues as before, serious outcome will come up.it is high time that (immediate measures be taken now.) (such a problem be put an end to
s2+s3+s4+s5+s6 100 words or so
s2 on one hand, we should urge our government to lay down stricter rules to forbid……
s3 should anyone dare to break the law, he to she should be put into jail for 5 years.
s4 in addition , our government should put in more money to protect ( encourage) …….
s5 on the other hand, we should try every means to enhance the public awareness of the issue of…..
s6 only through these measures, i firmly believe, will the above-discussed problem be efficiently resolved.
考研英語(yǔ)作文8
I have two good friends. They are Tom and Lana.
我有兩個(gè)好朋友。他們是湯姆和Lana。
Last week I asked them about what they think of TV shows and movies.
上個(gè)星期,我問(wèn)他們關(guān)于他們認(rèn)為什么電視節(jié)目和電影。
Both Tom and Lana like sitcoms, because they think they are interesting and enjoyable. Tom also likes scary movies, because he thinks they are exciting. Lana doesn’t like scary movies, because she thinks they are scary. Tom doesn’t like soap operas, because he thinks they are meaningless. Lana doesn’t mind soap operas, because she thinks they are OK.
湯姆和Lana都喜歡喜劇,因?yàn)樗麄冋J(rèn)為他們是有趣的和令人愉快的。湯姆也喜歡恐怖電影,因?yàn)樗J(rèn)為他們是令人興奮的`。Lana不喜歡恐怖電影,因?yàn)樗J(rèn)為他們是可怕的。湯姆不喜歡肥皂劇,因?yàn)樗J(rèn)為他們是毫無(wú)意義的。Lana不介意肥皂劇,因?yàn)樗J(rèn)為他們是好的。
考研英語(yǔ)作文9
52. Directions: Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the pictures below. In your essay, you shoulddescribe the picture briefly,interpret the implied meaning, andgive you comments.
【參考范文】
These two drawings, apparently, can be associated with two distinct habits. In the left one, there is a girl beside a desk, being absorbed in learning, with an idea in her mind —it is advisable to complete as early as possible. By contrast, in the right picture, a young guy sits leisurely in a sofa, telling himself, “I need not act until the deadline.” Finally, two Chinese characters can be noticed, which say “habit”.
Successful figures are usually characterized by their diverse merits, including diligence, perseverance and striving every day. However, in reality, a host of youngsters are accustomed to taking no action until the last day. This terrible habit is particularly worth concerning and as a matter of fact, their laziness has constituted an obstacle that hinders their personal growth and progress.
To my understanding, we are supposed to accomplish our assignments on time each day. This good habit can be likened to a journey, leading to success and a promising future. A case in point is myself. During the past year, as a senior who has been preparing for the national entrance examination for postgraduates, I have never postponed one day’s task until the next day. This excellent habit ensures my motivation for learning, brings me power and helps me accumulate knowledge every day.
To conclude, never put off till tomorrow what you can do today. Meanwhile, every one should bear in mind that a positive habit means a lifelong treasure.
【參考譯文】
顯然,這兩幅圖能聯(lián)系到兩種截然不同的習(xí)慣。左圖中,書(shū)桌旁有一個(gè)女孩兒,專(zhuān)注學(xué)習(xí)的同時(shí),大腦中還在想:盡早完成才放心。相反,右圖中,一個(gè)男孩兒悠哉悠哉地坐在沙發(fā)上,告訴自己:不到最后不動(dòng)手。最后,兩個(gè)漢字能被注意到,其內(nèi)容是:習(xí)慣。
成功人士的特征通常是他們的眾多優(yōu)點(diǎn),包括勤奮、持之以恒和每天的奮斗。然而,在現(xiàn)實(shí)生活中,很多年輕人習(xí)慣于直到最后一天才會(huì)有行動(dòng)。這種糟糕的習(xí)慣很值得關(guān)注,而且事實(shí)上,他們的懶惰已經(jīng)構(gòu)成了一種障礙,阻礙著他們個(gè)人的成長(zhǎng)和進(jìn)步。
在我看來(lái),我們應(yīng)該每天按時(shí)完成當(dāng)天的任務(wù)。這種好習(xí)慣能被比喻成一條路,通向成功和美好未來(lái)。一個(gè)典型例子就是我。在過(guò)去的這一年,作為一名一直在為考研做準(zhǔn)備的'大四學(xué)生,我從未將當(dāng)天的任務(wù)拖延至第二天。這種好習(xí)慣確保了我學(xué)習(xí)的動(dòng)力,帶給我力量,幫助我每天積累知識(shí)。
總之,今日事今日畢。同時(shí),每個(gè)人都應(yīng)該牢記:一個(gè)好習(xí)慣是一生的財(cái)富。
考研英語(yǔ)作文10
開(kāi)頭常用句式
It is with the greatest pleasure that I write to cordially invite you to attend ....
It gives me the greatest pleasure to invite you to present....
We should be very grateful if you could honor us to present...
結(jié)尾常用句式
I would feel honored if you could come.
I would like to meet you there and please let me know your decision.
My faly and I would feel honored if you could come.
考研英語(yǔ)作文11
Part B
Directions:
In your essay, you should
1) describe the drawing briefly,
2) explain its intended meaning, and then
3) give your comments.
You should write neatly on ANSHWER SHEET 2.
范文:
Vividly depicted in the cartoon is a race of humans on a social network that are isolated in their own little cubicles. They are all sitting in front of their computers, connected to each other through the Internet and their devoted looks and postures showed their addiction to the Internet.
This cartoon, I believe, intends to draw our attentions to the negative effects the Internet has brought to our daily life as it brings in some benefits, such as easy access to information, instant communication with people from afar and cheap cost of communication. The more people are hooked to the Net, the more isolated they are from the real world. Since people can easily pretend their identities on the Internet, everything online becomes illusive and untrustworthy. The Internet, which was intended to bring people closer to each other, in effect prevents people from making real acquaintances that one can make with a casual exchange of greetings and eye-contact in a face-to-face communication.
Serious consequences, such as fear of real-time interactions, online cheating or blackmailing, may follow if the use of the Internet is not brought under systematic control. I strongly suggest that people only use the Internet for necessary business transactions and personal contacts with those they have already known face to face.
考研英語(yǔ)作文12
At the same time, as China accelerates the process of (加快進(jìn)程) internationalization and more jobs are available to returnees, overseas students prefer to go back to China.
同時(shí),隨著中國(guó)國(guó)際化進(jìn)程的加快以及就業(yè)機(jī)會(huì)的`增加,留學(xué)生學(xué)成后更愿意回國(guó)。
Perhaps more importantly, the support from national policies acts as a further stimulus. Chinese government has adopted the policy of supporting the overseas studies, and encouraging overseas students to come back after they complete their studies.
或許更重要的是,國(guó)家政策的支持是長(zhǎng)久的刺激因素。中國(guó)政府一直采取“支持出國(guó)留學(xué)并鼓勵(lì)海外留學(xué)生完成學(xué)業(yè)后回國(guó)發(fā)展”的政策。
Firstly, as China continues deepening reform and opening up policy(改革開(kāi)放政策), the government has adopted various strategies, such as the Project of Thousands Talents to stimulate the return of overseas high-skilled nationals.
首先,隨著中國(guó)繼續(xù)深化改革、開(kāi)放經(jīng)濟(jì),政府制定了“__”等多種政策激勵(lì)海外高技能人才回歸。
Secondly, with the faster progress of internationalization, Chinese enterprises are recognizing the need for more employees with international qualifications and networks.
其次,隨著國(guó)際化進(jìn)程加快,中國(guó)企業(yè)愈加意識(shí)到他們需要更多具有國(guó)際資質(zhì)的關(guān)系網(wǎng)的雇員。
考研英語(yǔ)作文13
1、Of all American cities, San Francisco is considered by many to be by far the most beautiful.
2、Jobs and work do much more than most of us realize to provide happiness and contentment.
3、We are much less conscious of the extent to which work provides the more crucial(關(guān)鍵)psychological well-being that can make the difference between a full and an empty life.
4、Work is more than a necessity for most human beings; it is the focus of their lives, the source of their identity and creativity.
5、Rather than a punishment or a burden, work is the opportunity to realize one’s potential.
6、Few pastimes bring a faly closer together than gathering around and listening to mother or father read good story
7、Man differs most from all the other animals in his ability to learn and use language but we still do not know exactly how this is done.
8、The way the brain works is far more complicated than they had thought.
9、The more scientists find out, the more questions they are unable to answer.
10、Many Americans choose to travel by car rather than by any other means of transportation.
11、Worse perhaps was the idea of Saturday afternoon cricket.
12、There is no surgical patient I cannot treat competently, treat just as well as or better that any other surgeon.
13、Social customs are different from what they used to be fifty years ago.
14、He has to feel that he’s good as and probably better than any other surgeon in the world.
15、Behavior which may be considered quite strange in one culture is often looked upon as completely normal in another.
16、It is as hard to pass her by without giving her some money as it is to ignore the collection box in church.
17、It is as morally hard to turn her away as it is a lost dog.
18、Attitudes towards daydreaming are changing in much the same way that attitudes towards night dreaming have changed.
19、We accept the authority of our parents when we are young, but as we mature we may begin to question their advice.
考研英語(yǔ)作文14
一、指代方面的錯(cuò)誤
在使用代詞it,he,this,that,which,one等時(shí),前文中應(yīng)出現(xiàn)明確的先行詞。
如:Since we cannot know what particular bit of knowledge a child will need in the future,it is senseless to force him to learn it.,這句話中,him和it這兩個(gè)代詞都有明確的先行詞,分別是a child和knowledge,因此句子的含義非常清楚。
可是,不少學(xué)生在使用這些代詞時(shí),雖然自己很清楚它們指代的是什么,但在作文中卻沒(méi)有交代清楚,結(jié)果這些代詞非但沒(méi)有使行文簡(jiǎn)潔,反而造成了意思上的模糊,讓閱卷老師不知所云。
誤:Sometimes teachers will inform students of the heavy burden they have to bear.
正:Sometimes the teacher will inform students of the heavy burden he has to bear.
【說(shuō)明】句1中的they既可指教師,也可指學(xué)生,屬指代不清的?梢园阉鼈冎械娜我庖粋(gè)改成單數(shù)名詞。因?yàn)閱螖?shù)名詞也可以泛指一類(lèi)。
二、修飾方面的錯(cuò)誤
修飾語(yǔ)應(yīng)緊靠被修飾的成分,并和它形成正確的邏輯關(guān)系。如果修飾語(yǔ)的位置不妥當(dāng),就會(huì)造出模棱兩可的病句。
誤:To keep the air clean, we must move the factories which give off poisonous gases to the countryside.
正:To keep the air clean, we must move the factories to the countryside if they give off poisonous gases.
【說(shuō)明】句1要表達(dá)的是把有害氣體排放到農(nóng)村,還是把工廠遷到農(nóng)村去?顯然修飾語(yǔ)to the countryside的位置放錯(cuò)了。如句2改變一下結(jié)構(gòu),就能清楚地表達(dá)要表達(dá)的意思了。
三、一致方面的錯(cuò)誤
在一個(gè)句子內(nèi)部或緊鄰的兩三個(gè)句子之間,要保持時(shí)態(tài)、人稱(chēng)、數(shù)等的一致。
誤:Whether one enjoys or resents advertisements, we are actually bombarded with it every hour of the day.
正:Whether we enjoy or resent advertisements, we are actually bombarded with them every hour of the day.
【說(shuō)明】代詞應(yīng)與所指代的先行詞保持人稱(chēng)和數(shù)上的一致。句1也可改成Whether one enjoys or resents the advertisement, he is actually bombarded with it every hour of the day.
四、平行結(jié)構(gòu)方面的錯(cuò)誤
這里專(zhuān)指語(yǔ)態(tài)、比較級(jí)、非謂語(yǔ)形式、冠詞用法、可數(shù)名詞和不可數(shù)名詞、不定代詞單復(fù)數(shù)以及時(shí)態(tài)等錯(cuò)誤。
1、誤:Narrow streets easily cause to happen many traffic accidents.
正:narrow streets easily cause many traffic accidents. (to happen)
誤:A great change has been taken place since then.
正:A great change has taken place since then.
誤:But it may occur some new problems.
正:But some new problems may occur/arise.
誤:Opportunities are only belonged to those who work hard.
正:Opportunities only belong to those who work hard.
【說(shuō)明】happen,take place,occur,arise等動(dòng)詞和動(dòng)詞詞組一般既不能用作被動(dòng)結(jié)構(gòu),也不能作為及物動(dòng)詞帶賓語(yǔ)的。但學(xué)生作文中類(lèi)似的錯(cuò)誤較多:Our country has taken place a great change in many fields.
2、誤:The pace of our modern life is getting more faster and faster.
正:The pace of our modern life is getting faster and faster.
誤:Electricity is the most important power in our daily life than other kinds of power.
正:Electricity is the most important power in our daily life.
誤:Thus our city will be greatly beautiful than it is now.
正:Thus our city will be far more beautiful than it is now.
【說(shuō)明】這些都是在使用比較形式時(shí)出現(xiàn)的錯(cuò)誤。尤其是第1例較普遍。如more easier,more stronger等。
五、斷句方面的錯(cuò)誤
一句句子沒(méi)有結(jié)束,又開(kāi)始新的一句,結(jié)果造成句子結(jié)構(gòu)不全,這就成為斷句。
誤:TV becomes an important part in our daily life. Because we cannot live without it.
正:TV becomes an important part in our daily life,because we cannot live without it.
【說(shuō)明】以because,since,if等引導(dǎo)的從句是不能獨(dú)立成句的`,只能依屬于主句,所以不能寫(xiě)成另一句。
六、連詞方面的錯(cuò)誤
作文中缺少必要的連詞,或錯(cuò)用連詞的現(xiàn)象也比較普遍。
誤:One should improve his English,one should overcome difficulties in studies.
正:If one wants to improve his English,he should overcome difficulties in studies.
【說(shuō)明】學(xué)生在寫(xiě)作中往往意識(shí)不到連詞的重要,不善于使用連詞和連接副詞來(lái)明確標(biāo)示出因果關(guān)系、轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系、遞進(jìn)關(guān)系等。
七、搭配方面的錯(cuò)誤
學(xué)生作文中用詞搭配方面的錯(cuò)誤也占有較大比例。曾經(jīng)在一次六級(jí)作文閱卷中,近千篇作文在表達(dá)上海交通越來(lái)越擁擠這個(gè)意思時(shí),幾乎沒(méi)有一篇用 heavier,大多數(shù)人用的是The traffic in Shanghai is getting more and more crowded,而traffic是不能與crowded搭配的。
1、誤:However the speed of a car is much faster than that of a bicycle.
正:However the speed of a car is much higher than that of a bicycle.
【說(shuō)明】speed只能和high,low,good,top,normal,fantastic,moderate,surprising等搭配,不能與fast,quick,slow搭配。但可以這樣說(shuō)A car is much faster in speed than a bicycle.
2、誤:In the past the price of milk was so expensive that most families could not afford it.
正:In the past the price of milk was so high that most families couldnt afford it.
【說(shuō)明】price只和high,low,inflated,moderate,minimum,original,popular,prevailing,published,reduced,reasonable等搭配,不能與expensive,cheap搭配,但可以說(shuō)In the past,milk was so expensive that most families couldnt afford it.
由此可見(jiàn),要提高對(duì)詞語(yǔ)搭配的駕馭能力,除了要在平時(shí)的閱讀過(guò)程中多積累,還需要克服中文中諸如速度快、價(jià)格貴、學(xué)習(xí)知識(shí)、人減少等搭配的影響,避免寫(xiě)出look book或see book這樣的笑話來(lái)。
八、誤用方面
學(xué)生作文中對(duì)詞語(yǔ)的誤用也相當(dāng)普遍,誤用詞語(yǔ)不僅不能準(zhǔn)確地表達(dá)作者的意思,而且也會(huì)鬧出笑話。
1、誤:With the industrious development,there is a great need for different kinds of energy.
正:With the industrial development,there is a great need for different kinds of energy.
2、誤:Most big cities are plagued by traffic jams which effect our daily life.
正:Most big cities are plagued by traffic jams which affect our daily life.
【說(shuō)明】以上錯(cuò)句都是因?yàn)閷?duì)形容詞的辨析不清而造成的。Industrious是勤勞的,工業(yè)上的應(yīng)為industrial。effect一般用作名詞,其動(dòng)詞形式表示產(chǎn)生、實(shí)現(xiàn),而這里的意思是影響,應(yīng)換成affect。
考研英語(yǔ)作文15
some people think it improper for college students to dance. they say dance distracts students from their atudy. it is time-consuming and also a waste of money. besides, when men and women dance together, an intimate feeling will arise. that is terrible. they may fall in love before marriagable age, which will affect their studies.
i think the above opinion is one-sided and prejudiced. in my opinion, dancing is a good oercise and means of relaation. after a weeks tense work and study, it feels good to sit in the ball room, listening to light music in the soft lamplight. the colorful lamps twinkle and glisten. the sea-like blue light reflected on the blue screen lends a feeling of coming to the sea. the waves of white blue light smoothe your soul and comfort your heart. i feel serene just sitting there listening to the gentle words of a love song, not to speak of dancing.when the music is playing, you either chat or dance or make aquaintances. the more friends you have, the more enlightened and open-minded you are.
it cannot be denied that there are certain villains who want to take advantage of others and abuse dancing. we should not let the rat spoil the soup. just get rid of the rat. that is all. i prefer danceing once or twice a month to be relaed and refreshed for work and study.
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